Page 3, revamped and readable now!
Working hard with revamping chapter 3. The new dialogue is coming along nicely and I think it fits the overall world of Curly better now.
Sometimes it is a challenge to know what to keep and what to change when working on an old comic like this. Adding more screentone and greyscales, changing the trees, and adding more detailed backgrounds helps lift the comic while keeping much of the old line art. It also gives me more time to sketch out the outline for the next chapter and work on a first draft.